My Awesome(because I think so)Story by Dionne

This is a story that I wrote.Please read and comment for ideas and opinions for the next chapter:) Once upon a time there lived a guy and a girl named Halt and Briana.Halt was very tall and good as almost everything.Briana was also good at almost everything,but a bit shorter than Halt.So one day,they went to school but no one was there.At first they thought it was a special holiday that they did not know so everyone was at home.Halt decided to go home and so did Briana.When the two got home their moms asked why they were at home and not at school.Briana explained that there was no one at school so they wet home.At home Halt and Briana got bored.Halt said that he was in the mood for a Starbucks',but Briana wanted to go see a movie.So then there was this huge fight about this problem,but in the end their problem was solved by a 4 year old(even though Halt and Briana were fifth graders).The 4 year old named Derek,sai that they should go get a Frappucino and then go to the movies. Sorry for not writing anymore,I have to go take a shower before the play tonight.